Kia ora Ysabel! I really like the way you put a lot of the things that Mr Wilson told us in class and I really liked the way you told us what to do in case of a disaster. Next time you could add a bit more detail to make more interesting and I liked how you said to pack Medicine if you have elderly or if they are sick.
Kia ora Ysabel! I really like the way you put a lot of the things that Mr Wilson told us in class and I really liked the way you told us what to do in case of a disaster. Next time you could add a bit more detail to make more interesting and I liked how you said to pack Medicine if you have elderly or if they are sick.
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