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WALT: Use the writing process to create our DLO
Friday 23 June 2017
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The most fabulous squirrel :)
One beautiful morning a little squirrel has hidden little many secrets that no one knows. What does he do? Oh well he saves the world from many dangers, scream for help and he will come right away since he has amazing hearing. One time he saved someone from nearly drowning in their car. Hey! Don’t say I’m lying, you maybe thinking ‘This squirrel is too small to do all these things, what a big liar!’. Don’t judge a book by it’s cover because they may have amazing talents that they never show.
This little squirrel received his powers by working extra hard on becoming strong. One stormy night he got struck by lightning while walking home, he did not get hurt by how strong he was. How does he hide his secret so well? No one knows his secret or neither no one knows that he is the ‘Super Squirrel’. Other squirrels talk about him but he doesn’t try and get into the conversation because they may ask him if he knows who ‘Super Squirrel’ is. He saves people because he wants to see how bad the world is and want them to make a big change in their lives.
He wants the world to change into a better place to live in. Right now this earth he is living in is a big DISASTER! Litter everywhere and bad guys stealing things that don’t belong to them. One fine day he found a little zip that could change him into a superman costume! He has found his inner-superman. Does anyone know him? Yes, only one person knows him and that person is not a squirrel but a human. This squirrel has got missions everyday to save the earth from things that could change the world forever!
Maybe one day you’ll be a superhero of your own that could also save the earth.
THE END
BY YSABEL.
WALT:
To use punctuation correctly.
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