PUG FALLS OUT A WINDOW

PUG FALLS OUT A WINDOW

Pig the Pug recently fell off a pile of his toys… But did he fall or was he pushed?

 An eyewitness, Trevor, who is now currently on trial described the situation as we

interviewed him.

“I saw it, I saw it with my own eyes!  He piled all of his toys together, climbed to the

top and started to shout.  Then his pile wobbled to the left… and then to the right, next

thing you know he’s out the window!”

However, in the background of Trevor’s talking, Pig the Pug was wheezing out,

“He shoved m-me!” The words gave us a big surprise.  No questions were asked since

Pig the Pug was taken to the hospital. Trevor was asked non-stop but he kept on

denying the fact he pushed Pig the Pug.

There were no other witnesses; therefore, Trevor was the one who yelped for help.

To be continued...

The learning objective is to know how to write a newspaper report, to understand the structural features of a newspaper report and to understand the language features of a newspaper report.

 

Extraordinary Lightning

WALT:  Use a range of figurative language to describe a moment in time.

The lightning flashed brightly, it could light up the whole country!  A violent strike occurs again.  Its colors blazed through the deep and dark night sky as it shook the trees, bushes, and houses nearby.  Suddenly, a gleaming blue accompanies the pearly white light,  They clashed together in a cruel way...

BANG!  

A big roar was let out. The wind screeched and cried as it blew flowers down and yanked them out of the ground.  Lightning flared once again, it was brightest one of all.  This woke those who were in a deep slumber or perhaps hibernating.  Once you've woken up... You can't get back to sleep.
What I did well:
I did well on using descriptive language and using more exciting words.

What I could do next time:
Next time I could make my writing a bit longer.
I enjoyed: I enjoyed using unique words.