Hi Ysabel, I really like the way that you have explained all of the parts of a bird, but next time you could add some facts about all of the parts of a bird.
Kia Ora Ysabel I like your work because the bird is really cool. You have lots of great information. You could add what sort of bird it is. Well done from Briea .
Kia Ora Ysabel. Hi my name is Seamus and I go to Grey Main School and I'm in Mamaku 2. I like how are telling us about this kind of bird. I like how you are showing me how to find these birds. It reminds me of seeing a nearly rare bird in the bush once.
Hi Ysabel, I really like the way that you have explained all of the parts of a bird, but next time you could add some facts about all of the parts of a bird.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ysabel I like your work because the bird is really cool. You have lots of great information. You could add what sort of bird it is. Well done from Briea .
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ysabel. Hi my name is Seamus and I go to Grey Main School and I'm in Mamaku 2. I like how are telling us about this kind of bird. I like how you are showing me how to find these birds. It reminds me of seeing a nearly rare bird in the bush once.
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