PUG FALLS OUT A WINDOW
Pig the Pug recently fell off a pile of his toys… But did he fall or was he pushed?
An eyewitness, Trevor, who is now currently on trial described the situation as we
interviewed him.
“I saw it, I saw it with my own eyes! He piled all of his toys together, climbed to the
top and started to shout. Then his pile wobbled to the left… and then to the right, next
thing you know he’s out the window!”
However, in the background of Trevor’s talking, Pig the Pug was wheezing out,
“He shoved m-me!” The words gave us a big surprise. No questions were asked since
Pig the Pug was taken to the hospital. Trevor was asked non-stop but he kept on
denying the fact he pushed Pig the Pug.
There were no other witnesses; therefore, Trevor was the one who yelped for help.
To be continued...
The learning objective is to know how to write a newspaper report, to understand the structural features of a newspaper report and to understand the language features of a newspaper report.
Hi Ysabel,
ReplyDeleteI really like the type of language you put on this piece of writing. You have hooked me into reading more, it was a real shame it had to be continued... But overall a great piece of writing. Maybe next time you can finish the story. I'm really looking forward to more of this story.
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Dion
Thank you for the feedback Dion. I will do my best to finish my writing. :)
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- Ysabel.
Hi Ysabel! Amazinf piece of writing! I loved where you introduced the bit at the beginning where he was being interviewed in trial. You could fix the layout a bit though, But apart from that it's amazing! I hope to hear more pieces of writing from you! Keep up the great Work!!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the wonderful feedback. I have taken your feedback to fix my layout and I am working on finishing my writing.
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