Pig the Pug's Personality

WALT….

• Write a Character description
• Use ‘show not tell’ in our writing

Pig the Pug - Pig the Pug, the pug with the gigantic brown eyes and each one looks different ways.  He has such an abnormal body, he has rolls stacking on top of rolls.  He’s got a big bulbous body with stubby little arms and legs.  His body is… Somehow strange.  Pig the Pug has a bean bag looking figure, he may also look like many other things.  Some parts of him really don’t make sense.

Pig the Pug is self-centred, all he cares about is himself and only himself.  He wants everyone's attention and he wants everyone to know that he's a star.  He is such a stuck up little dog it will make you go crazy! He craves attention and he will steal attention whether you like it or not.  His actions are so peculiar and confusing it causes you to wonder if Pig the Pug is even a dog.  Pig the Pug is pushy, he bosses everyone around as if they work for him and he wants everything to go his way.  He is inevitable...

One jumbo dog with a wicked personality.  Pig the Pug, a controlling little pest, he makes everyone a victim of his malicious behaviour.  He's famous for stealing the spotlight and making others feel like they're nothing.  He shuns those who are 'worthless' to him… Well basically, everyone is a nobody to him.  He just wants to fill the void inside of him.

Pig the Pug is like an alien... Some kind of dog alien.  Honestly, his behaviour is out of this world and his room is a whole other planet.  You'd imagine him with a tiny wee crown and a throne to match his 'queen bee' personality but no.  His jumble of clothes is everywhere, it's puzzling how his trash can is so empty and his room looks like a landfill!  Food crumbs are here and there, it also stinks as if something had died.  Bits and pieces of his toys are always found even if you don't intend on finding anything.

What I did well:I'm happy with all 4 paragraphs because I really did my best.

What I enjoyed:
I enjoyed using more descriptive and interesting words that I haven't used before.

What I could do next time:
I need to work on some sentences to make my writing more clearer and use more punctuation.